User blog comment:XXTheRandomShowXx/Human of the Crash, Possible Story?/@comment-31349342-20170309215800

I might just try to add a thing myself in the comments.

''The ship was going to explode, which would damage my lifepod more. I quickly went back inside and looked at my fabricator for a Habitat Builder, as I looked what I needed. Computer chip, battery. I quickly began to search what I needed for a battery and computer chip, as I had only so much time. I realized that it would be too late to get anything. I decided to try to atleast try, as I jumped down into the water, holding my breath. I found strange one-eyed creatures. I picked one up and was told by the Personal Digital Assistant that it was a Peeper. I started to choke on the water. I swam up quickly, as fast as I could. The stalkes saw this and swam fastly towards me and the peeper I was still holding onto, and it took a large bite out of the peeper, and nearly took out my finger. I saw this but kept swimming away to the surface. I went up and coughed from the water and lack of breath. I quickly climbed onto the ladder and went inside through the top, and I realized the peeper was out of my hands. I was holding the mouth, as the stalker ripped off every other part of the body, except the mouth. I went outside and chucked it, no use. I was getting hungry, and opened the storage container and took a big bite out of the nutrient block. It was dense, hard, and hard to chew. The wire sparked near me, and I was startled by the loud noise it made. '''Pshish! 'I kept eating the Nutrient Block, and took a sip of water. I felt refreshed, but scared. Then another Personal Digital Asisstant message popped up. It read: ''

'"Emergency: Seismic readings suggest a quantom detonation has occured in the Aurora's drive core. The reactor will reach a super critical state in T- 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1." '

''I heard the detonation explosion. I went up to see it, and saw metal chunks flying as the engine exploded, then the rest. I wondered at the time..."What exploded my ship?"....I quickly went back inside, as a metal chunk flew and hit the hatch, leaving a mark. And a glass piece. I quickly ran to my fabricator to make a Repair Tool, and a Radiation Suit. I decided to try to calm myself by whisiling. ''

I think I did good.