User blog comment:Unknown the anonymous/The Story of My Subnautica World/@comment-38637059-20190409105844

i think thats a cool idea but i think you should make it more story-like. like, instead of "i found the fragment and the lifepod and the wreck" you should make it like "i found the fragment near the lifepod, which was pretty close to the wreck" hope this helps :)